It Knows No Boundries...

[Mathias13]

*Boundaries haha

C&C appreciated

 

[keybq]

i like the idea but i think that it needs a closer crop than it has.

 

[Mathias13]

a closer crop..

 

[AverageJoe]

I prefer the original, the close crop lost some resolution, great shot.

 

[TwoRails]

I like the first shot better. It offers a more solitude feeling to me, as if they are sharing deeper thoughts.

 

[tirediron]

Seems a little too centred to me and no real reason for the sepia treatment.

 

[robnelsonxx2]

Hi. I liked the sepia, but thought it was a little too strong. Maybe a lighter shade. I think the brightness and contrast could be brought down, too.

I liked the wider shot, too, because it expressed more solitude. But, the line of the fence bothered me, so I cropped it. I also lowered the brightness and subdued the man's shirt, because I thought it was attracting too much attention away from the main focus of the picture -- which for me is the playful expression they both have, which suggests the 'moment' between the two, which is always a great catch when taking pictures!

Here's my thought on it. Like I said, I cropped it because of the fence, though I liked the wider shot better (except for that):

Rob

 

[lazyd]

agreed althoug i know nothing about photography yet! the feel from the first one was great love the wider angle and even the sepia!

 

[danman281]

to me the fence is a little distracting but that might be part of your element. cool picture though