Japanese Store from EPCOT - Poll

[Parker219]

^ ok thanks, well I am gonna keep at it.

 

[Designer]

Edit:
Better? Worse? What do I need to change?

Well, that is at least somewhat better.

I will leave the remainder of the HDR comments to others, but the shot is not perfectly centered.

Someone has gone to a lot of trouble to create a symetrical arrangement, so the least you can do is to portray it as symetrical.

I think you should return to the shop and get your camera perfectly in the middle.

 

[Parker219]

^ Will do, thanks.