Jennifer - Corporate Style Fashion

[m.shalaby]

 

[oldmacman]

Nice. I love the pose and look in number 1, but seems like the top got away from the model at the pants in number 2. Are the cool colours to echo the coldness of the corporation?

 

[m.shalaby]

The colors are just added for visual effect and othing other. No deep meaning...

 

[bennielou]

Great. Love love love love love.

 

[tirediron]

Very nicely done, 'though I find the crop on the RH image just a bit tight vertically.

 

[honoryourlife]

She looks like she blends in nicely.

 

[margosoriginals]

I like the poses, but I find the blues in the background distracting from the fashion. # 2 is my favorite pose, but the crop on the point of her shoe is driving me crazy. People looking at fashion photography look the outfit up and down from head to toe. And I'm not saying that as an expert in photography, more of an expert in reading fashion magazines, so take what I say with a grain of salt.

 

[DiskoJoe]

crop is kinda tight and not feeling all the blues but her poses are good. Rail looks cheap though. Next time try to find something a bit fancier and turn so you have more depth behind her. This will add more blur to the background and more focus to the model.

 

[pixilstudio]

#2 seems like a more dynamic pose.. more movement

 

[Laika]

I actually really like the cool toning.

Though I am finding the bush in the left side of the image distracting, because the railing runs into it.

Overall I think they are sucessful. I prefer image one, as image two looks a little too tightly cropped.