Just a dog i saw on the street

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View attachment 112300 saw this dog while I was walking around town and so I took a simple picture and thought it looked good n black and white. There are a few technical aspects wrong with it that I try to avoid when doing human portraiture, but I liked it anyway, CC more than welcome.
 

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It looks good in your b&w. Like good, old film. The only thing I would say is the composition. It is not balanced very well. Otherwise it is nice and friendly looking dog.
 

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IMO, framing is way off.
Why did you include all the stuff on the left side?
Why are his/her paws cropped?
Why is he/she over at one side at the bottom?
The BW is a bit dull and flat. His/her eyes ar almost invisibly dark.
The rope trails off over the margin? why.
 
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Thanks both of you, you're definitely right about the composition/framing.
 

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