just a few photos from the last month for C&C

[cm_cnnr]

Haven't had time to post much but just a few pictures I'd like some opinions on.

1)

4s f/4.5 Shot at 78mm

2)

1/500s f/1.8 shot at 35mm

3)

1/640s f/1.8 shot at 35mm

Any suggestions? Anything could have been done better?

 

[tirediron]

C&C per req:

1. A nice firwork shot. I would crop some off of the RH side of the image, and the bottom to get the bloom off-centre and remove the silhouttes of the audience.

2. A little too much here; for this sort of shot, move in or crop more closely and avoid large areas of uncfocused foreground elements and watch for things like the missing berry image right middle.

3. Somewhat under-exposed and suffering from an odd colour-cast, which I suspect is due to a white-balance issue. I would use a polarizing filter on this to eliminate some of the reflection and perhaps a smaller aperture for more depth of field.

Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.

~John