Honestly I do not like the concept at all. It seems to me, everytime ive seen a photo edited in photoshop to be more artsy it ends up being ruined but thats starting out with a good photo in the first place. I do understand that some people like what you have done, people like it because its different I guess. I see the same type, styles on facebook everyday by the local photographers that call their selves professional because they can spot color. If you were to take a bit of any advice, I would just stop editing your photos for a while learn one step at a time. Learn your camera, possibly some technique and composition. It really helps if the photo was interesting in the first place, if you must edit in these manors.
What camera are you using anyhow? Just to get an idea of what we can do to help you with what you have. The camera doesn't make the photographer.