kids on a peir...

[BIG RYAN]

this is my first photo edited in lightroom 2.5 thoughts suggetions?

 

[Shockey]

Crop from the bottom or the top, you can't have it both ways. Looks pretty noisy, could use some sharpening and a little contrast.
Hard to say for sure cause of the noise but maybe some sensor dust in the sky.
Maybe if you crop most of the sky out and sharpen and add some saturation and contrast to taste might be a nice shot.

 

[BIG RYAN]

i already saturated the hell out of the sky it was almost totaly white.. ill go back and work on it some more...