Kind of a cool shot- looking for feedback

[Lodovico]

Hello,

I'm a noob, but getting really hooked. Thought this shot came out nice. Would love feedback. Thanks.

 

[480sparky47 46]

The blank wall on the right doesn't add anything, and could be cropped out without me shedding a tear. The snow looks awful grey.

You also need to clean your sensor.

 

[JeremyD]

I like the vibe to this photo, even just the window on the right cropped out would we nice. I find the snow darkened helps bring out the mood of the photo. Good shot.

 

[Lodovico]

The blank wall on the right doesn't add anything, and could be cropped out without me shedding a tear. The snow looks awful grey.

You also need to clean your sensor.

Please explain the comment about cleaning my sensor. I know what you mean by that, but what in the photo tells you that needs to be done? How often do you normally have to clean a sensor? This is a pretty new camera. Just curious. Thanks for the feedback.

 

[Lodovico]

I like the vibe to this photo, even just the window on the right cropped out would we nice. I find the snow darkened helps bring out the mood of the photo. Good shot.

Thanks!

 

[tagan]

Directly to the right of where the sun is shining through, there is a round spot, which is most likely sensor dust.