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While these are pretty nice for a wedding book where the beauty of the bride and the circumstance outweighs technical faults, there are two consistent issues, imo, that hurt them for standalone images.
The framing is off with lots of excess space - perhaps you will correct this for final prints.
Second, the brightness of the surroundings and/or the dress just pulls the eye from the faces. (worst examples, first row, second picture and the third row) First picture in second row, there are numerous blanched areas on her face and arms.
A last thing. I would certainly fix the under-the-chin bulge on the man in the first picture and the second picture in the second row. He will notice and thus hate the pictures but because his wife looks great they'll buy them. Make him look better and he'll be your best champion.
I think OP is long gone.