This is one section of an 8 page contract, with other disclosures that talk about his use. And furthermore, reread the disclosure: it says he can't do it without written consent, which he can always send me an email. My point is to not replicate or alter the image. His business manager has PS, so I want to caput that real quick.
Furthermore, this post detracts away from my OP, which was about licensing.
Written consent is very dangerous. What if you get hit by a bus tomorrow? Bye bye images and however much I paid for them, cause I can't use them for anything ever again since I can't get your written consent.
Or less dramatically, you just retire from photography or lose interest and stop responding quickly to emails.
Like I said before, if you truly are offering DRAMATIC discounts over your competitors, then I might still consider putting up with all this junk in your contract (by dramatic, I mean like
5-10% of your competitors' rates, for as much restriction as you're piling on).
But I think in the long run, you're probably losing way Way WAY more money this way than if you just stopped micromanaging what he does with his images to such a silly extent, and charged closer to competitive full price instead. With just one or two of the less draconian, basic restrictions that are MOST important here.
For example:
1) You can't sell this image to anyone else, only use it yourself for purposes related to this one particular business.
2) If you want a digital negative copy you can have it, but you have 6 months to download it conveniently, then I clear the Zenfolio space for other stuff.
3) I offer re-editing and other support services regarding these photos, including sending you a backup copy in a less convenient non-zenfolio fashion for up to 3 years. Possibly longer, but no guarantees.
The end. No other restrictions. Photoshop and do whatever the hell you want with it from now until the end of time within those restrictions. Then charge 80% of what your competitors would charge who request no restrictions, and you make more money.
What exactly would you be worried about happening with the above restrictions ONLY?
This is one section of an 8 page contract
Whaaaa? Frankly the mere fact of an 8 page contract, regardless of its content, for a simple photoshoot would probably make me look for another photographer in and of itself.
If you're shooting something super dangerous legally like minor children in a bubble bath where they might be nude on set (not on film), or something then Yes. Have a frickin 80 page contract and a team of lawyers at your back.
But for cute dog pictures for a vet? Come on. 1-2 page document should be plenty sufficient. Including space for signatures etc.