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Soujiro

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Life_by_kamigohan.jpg
 
To be honest, I can't really tell what is in the foreground in this picture. There seems to be a reflection of you and some sort of vent pulling my eye away from the tree you are trying to frame.

The tree/background are overexposed. I like the idea of framing that nice looking tree, I'd give this one another attempt or 5 to get that tree framed and exposed right.

Maybe a slight angle adjustment and a different time of day could do wonders.
 
hahaha yesss it's the stuff like this I like..an expression of something on your heart. As Matt said, your background is a bit overexposed, and I suggest rotating the whole thing a verrry small sinch to the left. I like the natural shapes you can pull out of this..the tree in the middle is very symbolic, and you've done a great job with balancing technicality and expression in this photo. Expand on your title if you have time?
 
To busy.
Bad Composition.
To many things IN focus.
I do not know what I am supposed to be looking at?
 
To busy.
Bad Composition.
To many things IN focus.
I do not know what I am supposed to be looking at?

A bit like life, isn't it? That's why it's such a great photo
 

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