Lighting C&C

[WhiskeyTango]

I'm playing around with some new lighting equipment.

Setup is:
Subject on pillow on floor
Medium softbox - camera right
Reflector (white wall) - camera left
Strip light - behind subject, camera left

The softbox and strip light are strobes

Here's the shot:


I'm pretty happy with this, but am always looking to improve.

Pool's open. Everyone in!

 

[The_Traveler]

While all the elements are correct, that clash between floor texture and coat hurts it for me.

 

[WhiskeyTango]

I picked it simply for its texture. I figured if my lighting got too flat, there'd be no hiding it on that, lol