Lights C&C

[Brandman]

light_line by Brandman1980, on Flickr

 

[Brandman]

Anybody?

 

[Demers18]

Unfortunately this image doesn't really do much for me. The bright white background is quite distracting and is really competing for the attention. The subject, as mentioned in the title, are the lights which would need to be more prominent or quite simply a different composition.

Keep Shooting

 

[tirediron]

Agree ^^ HOWEVER, if you crop the left side off at a point which removes the farthest-left-most light leaving the four most visible fixtures, you'll be getting somewhere.

 

[lauraxlovegood]

I agree. The light is just far too distracting... I mean, I kinda get where you're going with it, but it's hard to focus on the main focus point...

 

[Frequency]

With some hesitation, i too join others....
The dark projection in the bright region is a no..no

Regards