Little girl

[Designer]

Without trying to interpret what Pascal wrote, I will attempt my own critique.

#1 underexposed, confusing frame and background, and more of a family snapshot.
#2 fairly nice pose, except her eye contact is not at the lens, hat pulled down too far, vibrant colors overpowering the shot, distracting stroller handle in shot. This could be improved by de-saturating the color somewhat.
#3 heavy crop on top, needs vertical format

 

[Allenc873]

Paige,

Pascal said he didn't like it.
In that same thread, it was made clear that if you think someone is being rude or obnoxious, don't escalate it, leave it to the mods.
You called him a name for actually saying what he thought.
It's you that's off base, I think.

Paige didnt call him a name just said "pretty crappy thing to say" which is fair enough that's just her opinion which I agree with, and I don't think she was escalating it,just giving her opinion on what she thought of the comment.

 

[pascalriben]

Why do you say that pascal? I'm just curious. These pictures are of my daughter and because she's my daughter I find the majority of pictures of her adorable. I would just like to know why you say these are unatural. These are pretty close to the original (the sweater and hat are really that vibrant) and she wasn't posing. Interesting how everyone's taste varies, these are a few of my favorites since the lighting outside was great that day and the pictures were really high contrast.

She looks like acting especially for the camera: so, she doesn't look natural.

I'm sure she is a marvelous daughter, but if you want to know what people think about your photos, you shouldn't ask them to take in consideration the fact she is your daughter.

Why do you put these photos here: to know what people think about your daughter, or to know what people think about the photos of your daughter?

On a pure photographic point of view, as said by some others, these photos are not good IMHO.

All in all, I don't have any intention to bu rude or to offense you.

 

[manaheim]

folks...

Keep in mind that not everyone here on TPF is from a natively English speaking country. Don't always assume negative emotion when you read things that sound slightly different or peculiar.

It's easy to forget sometimes- particularly when people from other countries speak English better than I do, but just miss some of the subtleties.

Ok, so let's all (everyone, please) just assume that was a misunderstanding and move on.

 

[Aapoll]

I wasn't offended at all. I appreciate the critique, that's why I posted. I just wanted a reason explaining the comment that's all. Critique is only good to me when I know why something is said.