Lonely Curb

[doobs]

I'm curious as to anyone even likes this picture. I hate the fence on the side, but I did shoot it at f/2.8 and my camera has like no DOF for some crazy reason. I figured the lighting was good, so I was curious as to what people thought of it. I like the black and white one the most. Any opinions?

1. Original. Un-photoshopped (other than the signature at the bottom)

2. Cropped. Still un-photoshopped.

3. Black and white. This is also the cropped version.

Is it fodder for the trash or do you think I actually have something going for me here?

 

[jeroen]

I prefer the B&W version, since your white balance being off is
ruining the color version. The B&W does look underexposed though IMO.

For composition, I would crop to portrait and loose the entire fence and the curb to the right. You'd get something abstract then with the nice zigzag lines.

 

[doobs]

I really can't cut off the fence that far, or I'll lose some of the curbs. I'll mess around with it tomorrow morning. I'm pooped.