Looking for critique.

[Dagwood56]

Okay - just sat looking over all of these again. I'll admit the tilt to the photo does add a bit of "fun" that I don't feel in the straightened version. With her pose and expression that 'fun' does work, but only with the background stuff cropped out, but somehow, overall the shot still isn't working. [for me anyway]. I find I'm more drawn to the color version than the b&w, but again the background would have to go in the color version. Of the b&w versions you contrast seems better in the straight version, but I feel the tilt and chopped off foot work better with the vignette version. I'm really not trying to be difficult, thats just how I'm seeing it. It is a fun shot, there's just something askew with the overall composition\execution of it.

 

[HomelessBoy]

Is that lady even looking towards at your camera?

 

[hydkaran420]

Tilt is me