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tcarson

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So I guess you could consider me a beginner. I'm looking to expand my knowledge and talent and was wondering if any of you could provide some feedback on what works and what doesn't work with a few of my photos.

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With reflections like the second shot, a photo has more drama and tension if the water line is across the upper or lower 3rd of the image rather than across the middle.
Guidelines for Better Photographic Composition: Introduction

The last one can use a bit more contrast. With some cropped off the top it will have better balance and a more panoramic feel. The two boats are now sitting on the lower rule of thirds horizontal line.

A nice frame and a double mat will help aid presentation.

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I like the 3rd one. The fog gives it a really nice feel. However it looks a bit crooked to me.
 
The middle one has a slight blur color cast.
Using Photoshop CC 2014's Camera Raw (ACR) I made the following global Basic Panel adjustments:
Temperature +13, Clarity +30, Vibrance +10. (The Temperature adjustment addressed the slight blue color cast.)

I then used the Graduated Filter tool on just the sky and using these settings:
Exposure -10, Contrast +35, Clarity +20, Saturation +20, Sharpness +50, Noise Reduction+75.

I used Photoshop CC 2014 to crop some off the top of the photo and to create the double mat and frame.

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The third one is very well done in my eyes. The other ones feel a tad bit oversaturated. I do agree the third one seems a bit off contrast and a bit off centered aswell. Although I do think the composition is good.
 

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