shot with a pos flash, I'd rather have found some way of relecting in her eyes a bit, but I didn't manage it. A little dark, but I love the composition. any comments? (good/bad/ugly?)
ok since this is the critique forum, ill be the jerk and blast this one,
1) she looks confused yes, possibly even dumb. kind of a vacant stare in her eyes.
2) the angle makes me tilt my head, and now my neck hurts.
3) i like the idea but i want more color and get her outta the middle of the frame.
just my .02
i think you are going in the right direction though!!
I kind of like the angle of the shot...it adds interest to the vertical lines of the building that would otherwise be a little boring.
I like the pose but I don't like that she is looking out of the frame in a disinterested sort of way. Her face is a bit dark...a reflector would have been useful here.
I like the wavy reflection in the window behind the model but it is stealing some attention away from the model.
I think that composition is quite original and if you like it it's ok, but i'd prefer it not soooo tilted. And I'd like to see a handsome guy insead of her