Lost boys

[Starskream666]

 

[tirediron]

I wish there was a little more room at the bottom of #3. Nice image regardless.

 

[Starskream666]

Thanks

 

[vintagesnaps]

I like the abstract pattern in the second one. I wonder how the last one would be in B&W? maybe more dramatic or moody to show the 'lost' idea.

 

[jenko]

I like #3 best. Has an edge to it.

 

[mmaria]

I'll comment #3

Your subjects are interesting and they carry a strong energy. Looking at the picture has definitely made me feel something, so that's great, because evoking emotions is the most important thing. With that being said, I think you could compose it in a much better way.

 

[Starskream666]

I'm interested to know how you would have liked to seen it composed?

 

[mmaria]

I'm interested to know how you would have liked to seen it composed?

If I were there, I would took a wider shot. To give the viewers of the photograph the whole perspective and the whole scene. Do they sit on a bench? or a car? where are they? are they drinking something also? how they are dressed? and else... to give much more information about them and why they are "lost"

 

[EOV]

I agree with Maria here. A wider angle on the last one would give it more context. Depending on the background it would give the scene even more of a grungy feel which is what I am already getting from the photo. Good eye.