Love of moon

[Frequency]

C&C please

 

[EIngerson]

I like the image, but I think with a black back ground, I would bump up to about F8 or 11 and have the whole flower sharp.

 

[Frequency]

I too feel an overall lack of sharpness here ; thank you for your comment

 

[Joel_W]

Agreed about the lack of sharpness as the black background just makes the flower jump out at you. I keep on wondering is there a stem, and if not, how is it being suspended, or is it laying down on the background? That's one of the main issues why I stay away from solid backgrounds. I just end up with more questions and then answers. Over all, I think it's a great start, and with a little more work will end up as a excellent still life.

 

[Robin Usagani]

put the flower more to the bottom of the frame.

 

[BastiaanImages]

The center colours of the florers are beautifull! But there is a lack of sharpness indeed.

 

[Robin Usagani]

I actually like the lack of sharpness due to thin DOF. The middle is plenty sharp. If you had shot this with more DOF, the flower will look flat. I just wish you put the flower more to the bottom. Better composition I think.

 

[EIngerson]

I actually like the lack of sharpness due to thin DOF. The middle is plenty sharp. If you had shot this with more DOF, the flower will look flat. I just wish you put the flower more to the bottom. Better composition I think.

I'm thinking it would pop out of the background more with sharp edges though. I like your thought of putting it on the intersection of thirds though.

 

[gerardo2068]

I like it. I agreed that may be a little bit lower would work.

 

[Frequency]

Agreed about the lack of sharpness as the black background just makes the flower jump out at you. I keep on wondering is there a stem, and if not, how is it being suspended, or is it laying down on the background? That's one of the main issues why I stay away from solid backgrounds. I just end up with more questions and then answers. Over all, I think it's a great start, and with a little more work will end up as a excellent still life.

Thank you Joel for your analytical reply

regards

 

[Frequency]

put the flower more to the bottom of the frame.

Point noted

Regards

 

[Frequency]

The center colours of the florers are beautifull! But there is a lack of sharpness indeed.

Thank you Bastian; i too feel that

Regards

 

[Frequency]

I actually like the lack of sharpness due to thin DOF. The middle is plenty sharp. If you had shot this with more DOF, the flower will look flat. I just wish you put the flower more to the bottom. Better composition I think.

i too love flowers when they are bit soft, to feel them better

regards

 

[Frequency]

I actually like the lack of sharpness due to thin DOF. The middle is plenty sharp. If you had shot this with more DOF, the flower will look flat. I just wish you put the flower more to the bottom. Better composition I think.

I'm thinking it would pop out of the background more with sharp edges though. I like your thought of putting it on the intersection of thirds though.

Thank you Eingerson, for your time

Regards

 

[Frequency]

I like it. I agreed that may be a little bit lower would work.

Thank you Gerardo for your comment and thought

Regards