low light C&C

[Kofman13]

took this show in really low light, cloudy day with mesh window blinds closed, some PP.... just practicing how to take low light shots, and maybe salvage some light if they come out too dark,

 

[oldmacman]

took this show in really low light, cloudy day with mesh window blinds closed, some PP.... just practicing how to take low light shots, and maybe salvage some light if they come out too dark,

I like this shot. There are a lot of things that are really close to being right, compositionally. The horizontal line leading towards her works. The almost triangular shape of the red cushions works against you. This quick edit is just to show how the shapes could have been rearranged to help the composition:

The angle now creates a triangular shape that leads toward the subject. Sorry about the edge of the cushion, just wanted to give you a visualization.

 

[Kofman13]

thanks! , yeah that does look better with that angle