Maddy at the playground for c&c

[sjconner]

Here are some I took at the playground. Any suggestions? I experimented on having one sister in focus and one out. The opposite version turned out bad.

Thanks, Susan

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[JasonLambert]

Over all I like the photos.
#1 I don't care for the foreground blur.
#2 Nice shot and great freeze of motion! The only thing I see is the bottom of the picture on the right it look as though you got a little bit of the bar in the corner and with her foot there you don't seem to have any room to crop without amputating her leg.
#3 I like this one the best! Great Shot!

 

[abnormalreply]

I love the colors in the third one.

 

[Emilymarie]

Third by far is my fav

 

[dak1b]

1) girl in background is distracting..especially with red on.
2) good action shot
3) well composed. awesome shot!

 

[dayleigh]

I agree the blur in the front (sandy area) on number 1 is a little distracting, as is the blur of the child behind, mainly because red pops even when blurred,

I think you could possibly crop number 2 slightly, and not make her look amputated to remove the blur over her foot and still have an awesome shot, I love the motion freeze..

Number 3 is my favorite too, the color is rich and she looks like shes really enjoying herself which i'm sure is what you were hoping to convey and its a well executed and wonderful capture.

You have lovely children and I'm sure, hundreds of fabulous shots of them

 

[ezimon]

Nice shots

Love number 3, great composition and colors.