Mari.....: )

Ok I'm gonna keep at it till I get it right!




Thanks for lookin' and any comments or suggestions you may have! : )

 

You certainly are tenacious.

You're coming close with the lighting. There's a bit of the hair light spilling onto the forehead. And the shoulder should be in shadow... I'm not sure where that light is coming from.

The hair is a mess. Without some sort of diffusion, you're gonna have to spend more time with hair.

Like I say... you're on the right track!

Pete

 

You're right the hair was a mess......so first I ried something over her hair and then I also I did an updo to try to counter that as well.......Are these ones any better?











Again, thanks for looking! : )

And thank you Pete for your valuable imput....It's helping me quite a bit! : )

 

I really like the shot with the scarf - great idea as her hair was a little distracting.

 

Wow! you really getting good at this. These are great gal !

 

Thanks for the input guys I really appreciate it......Trying very hard to get the hang of this portrait thing! : )

 

neat shots PG! good comments pete, agree with what you're saying. That said these are really nicely posed shots.
keep at it!

just had to mention....Mari is my sister's name! the one in the snow thread neat

 

#3 is a sexy shot :mrgreen: I like it!