Maternity Picture

[Sontizzle]

this is my GF at 21 weeks.

C&C

 

[colpo di fulmine]

I like the concept very much.

 

[Pugs]

I love the black and white and I really like what you're trying to do with this!

My only critiques are that it seems a little soft or out of focus, and that it might work better with a bit of cropping and/or a portrait orientation.

 

[Sontizzle]

im going to give it a shot again once she gets farther along

 

[SympL]

A small suggestion if I may.
Next images position yourselves on a slight angle and this will better show her developing shape.
Well done.

 

[Pugs]

A small suggestion if I may.
Next images position yourselves on a slight angle and this will better show her developing shape.
Well done.

Ooh! Very good feedback!

Oh, and I also like the heart shape that your hands make. My wife found it a little cheesy, but I found it incredibly sweet. Was it intentional?

 

[Sontizzle]

yes it was intentional. thanks for the feedback!