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[Derrel]

The edge of the hand under her chin has a major green stripe on it. Right underneath her nose is still green too. Shooting around green grass and green trees caused a huge percentage of the naturally present light to carry green with it. Correcting this properly from a screen JPEG is not an easy task. I like the focus placement and the degree of depth of field you used, and the flyaway hairs do not bother me one, tiny bit.

 

[The_Traveler]

All of these seem to have a greenish tint most noticeable on the bottom of her right hand and around her mouth.
I guess that exposing for the shadows picked up so much light bouncing off the grass.
She does seem tilted to me.

 

[AR76]

Much better now. I'd leave the fly-aways, as they provide my eye with some details to play with once the main aspects have been 'assimilated'.
They also convey the light summer breeze in park, when I regard the image. There are some very light areas on the arms, that would be ok per se,
but I think they take away accentuation from the face.