I like the first one a lot, though I feel it could do with a bit more contrast (not much though); it has a vintage look to it, with the dress and hat. The second one is too smoothed for my taste, with a colour cast that I don't find desirable.
I think the skin has been overworked in both of these. The first one is quite a wonderful photograph, though, it has a lovely vintage feel and good light. Good job retaining the texture of the dress, and posing her.
Thanks all for responding . I really took down the clarity on both photos for that soft feel. I am going to open the raw file again and compare the original and the edited one. Thanks again