Miss Dalila

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by joylyn, Jun 13, 2013.

  1. joylyn

    joylyn TPF Noob!

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    Been awhile since I have posted been super busy on the home front.
    Here are a few pictures I took about 2 weeks ago let me know what you think.

    1. $IMG_0185fbbw.jpg F8 125s 85mm iso 200


    2. $IMG_0195-2s.jpg


     
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    I like the first one a lot, though I feel it could do with a bit more contrast (not much though); it has a vintage look to it, with the dress and hat. The second one is too smoothed for my taste, with a colour cast that I don't find desirable.
     
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    Really like the softness in the black and white picture.
     
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    I think the skin has been overworked in both of these. The first one is quite a wonderful photograph, though, it has a lovely vintage feel and good light. Good job retaining the texture of the dress, and posing her.
     
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    Thanks all for responding . I really took down the clarity on both photos for that soft feel. I am going to open the raw file again and compare the original and the edited one. Thanks again
     
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    The smoothing in the second one is really pageant-contestant-headshot-ish. Whether that's bad or good depends on what you were going for.

    I dig the first, very classic.
     
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