Miss Nicole

[agompert]

I had fun with this shoot

 

[gian133]

I feel like this would look better with a really bright background. Like orange.
The white just isnt doin it for me.

I like the pictures tho. The lighting is nice.

 

[xiangji]

mmm...too many shadows on the wall behind

 

[Pugs]

Yeah, the shadows on the wall are distracting and in photo 2, the texture of the wall looks sharper than her face. I also wish that cigarette was lit in 2.

I dunno. I can see that it would have been a really fun shoot. I think that there are just a few things to work on like how you light the backdrop, how far from the backdrop you position the model, and/or your aperture to blur the backdrop (if it has texture like this one does). Also, there's something about the poses/composition that looks a little off to me.

Even so, it's WAY better than I could do, so take my comments with a grain of salt.