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ScoobyRoo20

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I don't know how to describe this one. I didn't realize it was so "dark" until I saw it on the comuter screen. Any thoughts? Yes I know it's a little grainy. :D
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I don't mind the grain at all, but I think it could have benefitted from your pointing your camera up a little more in composing the image, to lose some of the asphalt in front of your boy and getting some more of that "roof" into your frame. Else I like the symmetries here, but you could have worked a bit more on the lines around your boy. B+W is fitting for this one.
 
I think the extra asphalt at the bottom gives a good sense of perspective. All your photos I've looked at today make me think of films, I dont know why but this one reminds me of "The Shining" :)
 
Very cool. Personally, I'd up the contrast to make it more "dark" ... nice job, though
 
Thanks for the comments y'all. If it was easy for me to go back and redo, I would. But it's an expencive trip back to Boston. lol
 

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