Model - Lindsey

[max3k]

Thought I would share 2 shots from the other night.

 

[oldmacman]

Thought I would share 2 shots from the other night.

Love these shots. This is just a personal preference, but what about a little more light on the first one? Just an idea...

 

[max3k]

Thanks for the comments Mac. I also looked at boosting the exposure a bit, but really liked the mood of the one I posted.

 

[doziergraphic]

i like the background and what you did with 2, but not sure i like the look of the eyes. maybe looking left or right. I realize these are only two of what you shot, but both have closed eyes.

 

[lildlege1]

I love them !!!! How did you do that??

 

[reznap]

First one rocks.. I like the brighter edit as well. Did you gel the light/strobe or is the color from a white balance adjustment?

 

[Robin Usagani]

Nice!

 

[kundalini]

I think one more kiss of light to the back of her head and left arm for separation would have made a significant difference. There are a couple of specular highlights I would try to de-emphasize, but particularly the one on the left breast because it is not casting a golden tone as the others.

Just not diggin' the harsh chin shadow in #2. Certainly not a bad attempt at mood, just not there for me.

Just my 2¢, says the armchair quarterback.