Model Portrait at Le Bridge

[phoenixdot]

I'm really apologize if my editing is far from perfection.

This is my first time post a picture here, i really appreciate critique and input you give to my picture. :cheer:

#1

Untitled by Yovandra, on Flickr

#2

Untitled by Yovandra, on Flickr

Shoot using Canon 550D and 16-35 f2.8L II USM, and 2 Nissin Di866

 

[Mark_McCall]

The first image seems to lack sharpness. Could be a result of sizing for web, but it's pretty soft.
Love the 2nd one, but it's really overexposed. Background exposure is great, however.

 

[tingeliM]

I agree with Mark. Plus the centered composition doesn't really work in the first one. I'd love the second one if it weren't for the over-exposure and the harsh light/shadows.

 

[KaVla]

Ditto, what Mark said.

 

[joealcantar]

Yep, what Mark said

 

[Trever1t]

Gorgeous model, lovely poses. Welcome to the forum, keep shooting!

 

[2WheelPhoto]

 

[cgipson1]

welcome! Pretty much what was said before... #1 is soft.. #2 subject is way overexposed. Beautiful eyes on that girl... would love to see more of her!