Shot #1 and #5 is nice, I like those, well done. Great pose and expressions.
The only thing I would pick from #5 is that the top of her forehead, there's a little patch of hair I think? Which, in my opinion would look better if it was cleaned up with the clone tool or some other technique that would result in the same outcome.
#1 is pretty good, but I gotta agree with Mike...the location is all wrong for pin-up. Definitely give cudos to the make-up & wardrobe, though.
Proper looking pin-up is difficult to achieve, but you've got the right model for it. I think she would look fantastic with an early model hot rod, like a Deuce coupe or T-Bucket. Try out a local hot rod drive-in and talk to a few of the owners...you might be surprised at how many wouldn't mind donating some time in trade for a couple of prints of a pretty pin-up with their car.
thank you all for the all the comments. And yes she is a wonderful model.
1. the make up, she is a makeup artist so that helps.
2. the hair on the forehead,good capture ill fix that.
3. love the idea of checking out local hot rod events, acutally there is a guy in my neibor hood that has a sick hotrod need to ask him.
4. true on the location, but that is what i had to work at the moment.
once again thanks all.