More teen shots outdoor and indoor

[Rosy]

Took some shots of my daughter's friend - let me know what you think

#1

DSC_8355 copy by casualapproach, on Flickr

#2

DSC_8403 copy by casualapproach, on Flickr

#3

DSC_8499 copy by casualapproach, on Flickr

#4

DSC_8498 copy by casualapproach, on Flickr

 

[MLeeK]

They are beautiful!!!
1. I wish you had included all of her instead of cropping just below the knees.
2 THis is a good, strong image. The wrinkle in the shirt is a draw, the canvas or whatever she's sitting on is a bit of a draw.
3.I wish for a slight rim light to the left, but it's just a beautiful, strong image.
4. I wish for a slight bit more light to the left.
AWESOME job!

 

[Rosy]

thanks MLee
#1 - I have more of the full body, I wanted to get her a little closer -
#2 - WOW, your eyes are incredible.
#3- I am googling rim lights, don't own any
#4- yep I had no light to the left on this one

DON'T you ever leave TPF...
Thank you for your time!!!!!

 

[MLeeK]

a rim light is just a little bit of light that highlights the hairline so that it doesn't blend with the background.

 

[Rosy]

oohhh - sorry

 

[MLeeK]

Don't worry... even the best of us just plain forget it on occasion! GUILTY! LOL! They're beautiful shots to be proud of!

 

[Rosy]

thanks again!

 

[kathyt]

Very cute girl and good set here.
#1. I wish you would have either got in really close here or got a full body. I feel like something is chopped even though technically it's not. Nice shot though.
#2. Love this one. The only thing I would have done was brought in her right hand and had her place in on her leg.
#3. Cute shot and pose. Needed a brighter shirt to boost the overall look a bit maybe?
#4. Holy dog is bigger than her. This just needed another fill light camera left to get rid of the shadows.

 

[Rosy]

thank you Kathy

In a case like #1 would you crop it in to get real close...or just learn from the mistake ?
thanks again for the tipsthe doggy is a Wesite, he's not that big. Hmmm not sure I can explain it

 

[Derrel]

She's a very cute girl, no doubt. My main concern is that these all appear quite over-sharpened for web display...the images are just sharpened too much.

 

[kathyt]

thank you Kathy

In a case like #1 would you crop it in to get real close...or just learn from the mistake ?
thanks again for the tipsthe doggy is a Wesite, he's not that big. Hmmm not sure I can explain it

I wouldn't crop. I think it looks fine the way it is now. Technically it is correct.

 

[Rosy]

I'll go back and review the PP - not sure I did much sharpening
got me thinkin'

 

[sactown024]

the only thing that really turns me off is the brown shirt with black background, i think a white backdrop would have been a better choice, its kind of a faux pas, other than that they look great

 

[Murasaki]

I am new to this entire so learning fast.

No 1, Full body shot would have been nice, she has a great smile and lovely face and that drew me in.
No 2, The Yellow T-Shirt draws you in, it really stands out. It was the first thing that caught my eye.
No 3, Brown Shirt and a different background would have been nice or black background and some brighter colour T-shirt.
No 4, As with No 3, that smile draws you in again, I like this shot.



Over all, nice young lady, nice shots and I hope one day I can do the same.

 

[Rosy]

thank you