My B&W film endeavors

labbedavid1 · Feb 8, 2015

Just to start this off I am new to this forum and if I am doing something wrong let me know.

Edit: as suggested I have posted the photos instead of linked them

limr · Feb 8, 2015

The first two look very nice. The second two are too underexposed and the composition/facial expression is also not as interesting.

Edit: You should also become familiar with clone and heal (scratch removal) tools. There will always be dust spots on film and they can be distracting. It's good to learn how to remove them.

dxqcanada · Feb 8, 2015

Hi. Welcome.

If you really want people to C&C you should post one or two images as opposed to a link to your site ... unless you want an opinion on the site itself.

... though you only have three images ...

labbedavid1 · Feb 8, 2015

Thank you to you both. The last two I know are bad overall but I like that like candid indie messed up vibe they gave

dxqcanada · Feb 8, 2015

I personally don't like last two. Not keen on the underexposed flat look, and not much is going on in the image.
The first one is good, I like the composition and the OOF secondary subject ... and how they are connecting to the viewer. The blacks/whites are nicely balanced.