my first attempt at a wedding

[barleymalt]

I asked a friend if I could come to her wedding and take some pics just to experiment and see what I could do. The wedding was at a beautiful spot by a lake but I got there late so I couldn't get any decent shots outdoors.

Would like some C&C on these. Are they any good?

 

[fokker]

The first two are just too dark. Number 3 looks like they are at a funeral, not a wedding.
Last one is interesting, but like the rest of them it just doesn't say 'wedding' to me.

 

[peterhanowell]

I agree partly with fokker - first two are really underexposed. You can try to bring them up in post processing, but I'm not sure you'll like what you find.

I really like the last one. Great job!

Peter
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Photographer Tallahassee | Photography Tallahassee

 

[misstwinklytoes]

I really like the last one too! I LOVE! this guys suit!

 

[Taylor510ce]

I agree with all comments. I also find the foreground blur to be ditracting in the last one. I assume this was added in post?

 

[barleymalt]

Thanks for the comments. They're pretty much in line with how I feel about them. The blur in the last pic wasn't added in post. All I did to it was drop the color and add some lighting.

 

[Flash Harry]

You should have added the lighting at the "do", and rule one in wedding photography, get there before everyone else. H