My first photoshoot with a model. CC welcome

[Corvphotography]

number 1 and 11 are favorite. she is pretty damn cute. keep up the good work.

 

[mostly sunny]

#5-- Love the the selective color-- but the pose--

She photographs well...

 

[vtf]

As mentioned above Ive noticed the soft focus in these shots. Sharpened up they make a more dramatic statement to me.

 

[skieur]

You need to scour some books and websites on how to pose models. You have managed in these photos unfortunately to break every guideline and/or "rule", that was ever written in that regard, and not in a successful manner, either.

skieur

 

[MohaimenK]

You need to scour some books and websites on how to pose models. You have managed in these photos unfortunately to break every guideline and/or "rule", that was ever written in that regard, and not in a successful manner, either.

skieur

WTH??? You brought this thread up after 3 months??? :er:
Seriously?!?

 

[LittleItaly]

Well she's attractive and the composition, exposure, and lighting are all fantastic.

But why is it that in only one picture her face is different? She has the exact same non-smile and look in every single picture except for one where her mouth is slightly open (but the rest is the same). It portrays the exact same emotion in every one.

Yeah I noticed this as well.

She is probably a beginner model... common mistake. "Model Face"

 

[Linkovicha]

Just a newbie... maybe #2 would of been better horizontal?

Great shots!