my first portrait

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This is my first attempt at taking a portrait.

What do you think? Any advice his highly appreciated!

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Thank you Lenny!
I tried to crop it a bit but I'm afraid to overdo it. Is that enough?

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Taralyn Romero said:
I think the crop looks good - nice job, I like the naturalness of the mans expression.

I hope not to offend anyone here, but I cannot see an adams apple, and the person has ear ring holes, that mans expression may be a ladies?

Sorry if i have offended i did not mean to.:blushing:
 

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Pleasant expression and good use of depth of field. Perhaps consider using the camera vertically, or cropping to a vertical frame to suit the shape of the subject.

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Play with your contrast and levels a bit, and I think you have a very nice portrait here.
Nicely done.
 
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Thank you all for your nice comments!

I tried to play a bit with the pic in PS
Here's what I got!
What do you think?


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