My first post

[garran]

This is my first post ... please be gentle, but honest.

 

[Eastw77]

You need to focus on your victims eyes! this image would be so much better. You seem to have focussed on the strands of hair near the right eye.

 

[Emerana]

yeah its out of focus. I dont care for the crop, but thats a preference, some may like it.

 

[garran]

You need to focus on your victims eyes! this image would be so much better. You seem to have focussed on the strands of hair near the right eye.

I've never noticed it before but you're right ... I need to pay more attention to the details as they seem to make or break the picture.

Thanks

 

[Lacey Anne]

Yes, focus could be better. I like the concept. I like the crop too.

 

[jols]

I love this type of crop, just master the focus a tad