Hmmm, all I saw is a guy in a nice green shirt who was going to wipe the tears from his face because he was so fraught with emotion!
I thought you did a great job given the circumstances! I would only be repetitive to mention what has already been mentioned.
I was also able to apply quite a bit of NR to the image without losing much detail. I brought the highlights down a tad and set the black point and white point. I adjusted the WB a tad, added a slight vignette, and added a very small GND filter to the left side of the frame. I also made a slight adjustment to the horizontal perspective, then re-leveled the lines with a slight crop.