My little sis

[tx8koibito]

One More: this time with a smile

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[tx8koibito]

I like it. I think her little pose is so sweet. I love how her hair is illuminated by the window behind. I like the horizontal crop on this. With the window (context) I get the feel that she is at school...possibly first day?. It is a little crooked and could use some straightening. You could also lift the shadows a tiny bit to better define her hair. Her skin seems a tiny bit cool so I would add a little warmth too. Cute shot!

Thank you will keep and I out on next shot

 

[tx8koibito]

Is "People photography" still a critiquing section? :scratch:

I believe all of the forums in this area are for C&C, except "Just for Fun"!

C&C is welcome, would love to improve these shot

 

[tx8koibito]

 

[The_Traveler]

Unsaturated and too dark, imo

 

[tx8koibito]

Unsaturated and too dark, imo

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Hi, Thank you for your effort but that was a "dawn" photo I purposely made it darker to illustrate sunset.

 

[tx8koibito]

This have to be my favourite