My pappy

[jamagica]

Basic profile, but I see the best of my Dad in this

 

[jamagica]

bump

 

[jamagica]

bump...can someone say it sucks if it does?

 

[jamagica]

what's up dudes? I usually don't bump 3 times but this has been up for a few months now...Is it that bad?

 

[leighthal]

I like his little smirk.

I think the lack of response is it just lacks interest. Without having an emotional attachment to the subject it's just a profile with blown out whites on his shirt.

I'm quite new to this photo stuff so I can only offer what would interest me more as a viewer. Others with more talent might be able to help you more on the lighting and such.
To make it more interesting for me I would....try to capture a bit more personality by not having it so "this is the left side mugshot". More focus on the eye area might help as well.

 

[Chadfehr]

i like it, its basic which is nice, not overdone what so ever