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Jez

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Very nice; a couple of issues I see. (1) The skin temperature seems somewhat too warm; and (2) you seem to have missed focus. Your DoF was so thin thin that the focus appears to be about 6" in front of her face.
 
Exactly what striked, stroked? me too. Tones are off and too soft. Otherwise it's a cute pose and frame.
 
Agreed with the temp and focus.
Now I'll go get Trever some blood thinners for his stroke.:laugh2:
 
The Exif says it was on a f/1.4 85mm lens, with the settings at 1/160 sec, f/1.8, ISO 100. You need to drop your shutter speed a little, up your ISO, and close your aperture down to around 5.6-8.
You have a beautiful wife, with a great pose and smile. :)
 
IMO,

Non-standard aspect ratio for no reason.
way too shallow DOF (f 1.8?)
She's over to the right for no obvious reason.
Blanched areas on top of cheeks

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What they said ^.

P.S. She's gorgeous!
 
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Struck.

Dang how many strokes are happening around here?:801:
 
Very nice and casual.

Actually quite orange though, (@tirediron, ever the gent :)). I don't know if you were going for warm colours but it's a little too much for me. The cast takes some of the crispness out:

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I agree a little with @The_Traveler about the crop, but I quite like slightly off-centre and think it balances the image better:

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