My wife...

[taknbyd]

Practicing on the wife again... Very new to photography...CC welcome..

 

[kundalini]

It's not so easy to give C&C when you personalize it with a title like 'My Wife' or 'My (fill in the blank).

With that, the comment I am willing to make is that IMO, it is better to have some white on either side of the eye, even just a sliver.

Oh yeah, she is quite pretty.

 

[taknbyd]

Thank you for your comment.. I toke this pic a little before I heard your advice about it a couple days ago about the eyes.. I will make sure to keep that in mind.. Thank you!!!!!

 

[Pband]

it is better to have some white on either side of the eye, even just a sliver.

I have seen for lot of models doing this. Can you please tell me the reason?

 

[sunlou]

I am a beginner too, so nothing very technical,

I like the lighting and hair movement

the only thing I am sure in that picture is the posture, I would have preferred her shoulders a little more oppened, athough she is smiling, I feel she is closed...


that is my humble 2 cent ( feel free to contradict me if you don't agree, critic about my critique is very welcomed

 

[paigegreen916]

personally, i would have moved her more to the right of the frame and stopped down a bit more, but other than that, its a very nice image and you have a very lovely wife!