Myanmar Protrait.

[thiha]

hi guys,
my another photos.

 

[JoshuaSimPhotography]

Number 2 here face is a bit underexposed. And in the rest, just be careful with the vignette as it could also cause some underexposure

 

[cayto]

#1 Dont like very much the DOF, we see much background and makes it distractive from the model

#2 Like Joshua said, her face is clearly underexposed; like the DOF here, the color, ...

#3 I think the vignette was not the best choice

Keep practice, better results will appear :thumbup:

 

[thiha]

thanks for all comments. i'll keep practicing