Natalie C&C

[ang1995]

What do you'll think of this pic??

I know that there is that hair by her chin that I need to clone out

 

[Derrel]

I've seen this technique before...this is an okay rendition of it, but I think there's just a tad bit too much space on the left. What bothers me the most is the obvious fakery on the eye color. You've done a very good job of focusing and portraying her in the neo-realism style (also known as hyper-realism by some).

 

[rsawyer]

What bothers me the most is the obvious fakery on the eye color.

I actually think it's kind of cool. I'm guessing it's just an artifact of trying to boost the lip color.

 

[ang1995]

I've seen this technique before...this is an okay rendition of it, but I think there's just a tad bit too much space on the left. What bothers me the most is the obvious fakery on the eye color. You've done a very good job of focusing and portraying her in the neo-realism style (also known as hyper-realism by some).

Thanks for the comment! I know what you mean about the eyes being a little over done but I kinda like it in this pic.

 

[ang1995]

What bothers me the most is the obvious fakery on the eye color.

I actually think it's kind of cool. I'm guessing it's just an artifact of trying to boost the lip color.

Most everyone that see this picture likes the eyes and that is normally one of the first things that they say they like. It's just a different taste in preference

 

[Derrel]

Sure, some people will like the eyes...it's just that the style of neo-realism depends on showing the "reality" of the subject, in sharp,clear,intense detail--which you do...we can see all the little imperfections, the hair in minute detail...but then the eyeballs are clearly faked...and that works against the rest of the photo. Some people also like the food at Arby's...and think Jersey Shore is a good TV show...so there's little accounting for taste.

 

[shootermcgavin]

Jersey Shore rocks! I don't like Arby's though.

 

[cnutco]

What bothers me the most is the obvious fakery on the eye color.

I actually think it's kind of cool. I'm guessing it's just an artifact of trying to boost the lip color.

Most everyone that see this picture likes the eyes and that is normally one of the first things that they say they like. It's just a different taste in preference

I like the eye, but I do not like the lips being two different colors..

Cute kid though!

 

[ang1995]

I actually think it's kind of cool. I'm guessing it's just an artifact of trying to boost the lip color.

Most everyone that see this picture likes the eyes and that is normally one of the first things that they say they like. It's just a different taste in preference

I didn't really notice the lips being two different colors

Thanks! She's my little sister

 

[margosoriginals]

I like the eye color, but I agree about there being too much space on the left, and 2 different color lips.

 

[WilfordSy]

Sure, some people will like the eyes...it's just that the style of neo-realism depends on showing the "reality" of the subject, in sharp,clear,intense detail--which you do...we can see all the little imperfections, the hair in minute detail...but then the eyeballs are clearly faked...and that works against the rest of the photo. Some people also like the food at Arby's...and think Jersey Shore is a good TV show...so there's little accounting for taste.

This makes a lot of sense. I personally like the eyes too but from a foundational perspective - what Derrel said makes a lot of sense. And i just learned something new today. Thank you kind sir!

Nice photo by the way. Deinitely need to clone out hair in chin

 

[ang1995]

I changed a few things in this one and I also cloned out the hair. What do you think now??
I tried to fix the lips but I don't think I did a very good job

 

[jgooz]

i think you got it pretty close, i like it. the hair definitely needed to be cloned out but by doing that it seems to have exposed a small mark below her lip. it's subtle but still somewhat distracting. id say soften that up a little. but otherwise GREAT shot!

 

[ang1995]

i think you got it pretty close, i like it. the hair definitely needed to be cloned out but by doing that it seems to have exposed a small mark below her lip. it's subtle but still somewhat distracting. id say soften that up a little. but otherwise GREAT shot!

Thank you!

I see what you are talking about and I noticed that right after I uploaded the picture. I will deff change that.

 

[cnutco]

I agree, I think you got it pretty close. Great cloning too...