Heya harlanr3, welcome to ThePhotoForum - nice to have you here.
I think that if you follow Trenton's ideas with your second photo shown here, you might really get somewhere. Don't forget to straighten your crooked horizon line in the process.
What do you work with?
Do you save them out of Photoshop, maybe? Don't save them at their highest resolution, for Photobucket will then feel free to resize/condense them as they like, and that ruins the quality. Save them at a lower res (not too low, just not 12) and upon loading them up, they will be left alone.
And watch the sharpening tools. Those want to be used with care!