Some general comments/thoughts in random order:
The text in the logo at the top looks really squished in there and is barely legible. In fact, all the contact info is pretty hard to read. Any chance to bring this info out, group it in one location (maybe near the bottom?), and make it easier to read in the same font/size?
For the "Contact Amber Rust at...", maybe just say "Contact Amber at..."? You've already stated the last name above (which needs a little more space above it). Also, it makes it feel a little more personable.
Also, and this may just be slightly OCD of me, but all lines of text look rather... scattered. With no alignment. Also, the three different fonts in all different sizes also makes it appear somewhat scattered.
While I like "Limited seats available" being bolded to balance out that side, I dislike that particular text being bolded. Maybe bold the date and move it down? So, it would go, "Lunch provided...", then "limited seats", then bolded date/time, then contact/info/reserve seats/et cetera?
I should state that I'm not a graphic design artist, so, please, take any and all of my comments with a grain of salt.![]()
Very nice TC - two thoughts: How much am I going to have to put out for this workshop, and is the lunch included in the price, or extra? Also, (and I realize it's a limitation of the model) any chance of a happier looking child?
Depends... how much are you charging? In my area, I would expect to pay between $90 and $150 for a session like this, depending on how posh the lunch is. Price is a huge 'decider' for me, and if I don't see a price, chances are I'm going to assume it's out of my reach and not go further. I think you need to consider the group you want to attract; do you want the $50 session shoot & burn fauxtographer who will balk at $150, or do you want the serious aspriing pro who understands that good training costs money?Very nice TC - two thoughts: How much am I going to have to put out for this workshop, and is the lunch included in the price, or extra? Also, (and I realize it's a limitation of the model) any chance of a happier looking child?
I have been debating all day long about adding the price..... ugh. You think have the price on there? I just don't want to scare people away until they see what is offered. Lunch is included in that price. And happier baby.... piece of cake. I like the colors this little dude had, but I've used this set multiple times, let me see if I can find a happier looking baby on this color scheme. If not, I suppose I could change the colors.
These are great suggestions. Maybe I need to ditch the logo. When it's large it looks great, but smaller on this it is hard to read. I will go take my last name off of the "contact Amber Rust" that is a wise idea. I was going for scattered on the text, but maybe it's not coming off the right way. I had only two fonts - which is great in graphic design - but I forgot that when I add my logo, it throws in a third font...
How about...
Newborn Photography
A workshop by Amber Rust
Posing - Lighting - Shooting - Editing
With lunch courtesy of Maple Springs Catering
All for only $XXX.XX
Much better. I like that title change too. And a minor nit... Take that logo in the corner and move it up and to the left just a bit. You need a little more margin. It's minor, but small adjustments can make a big difference.