need critique

[jdphotographer2091]

i just started getting serious about photography.
Im only 16 and i am looking for critique to make my work better.
Dont hesitate to be harsh.

thanks



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[IndieMe]

I like 6 and 3 the best,

The skin colour looks a little un - natural like there's too much contrast.

All in all good job! :mrgreen:

 

[Sideburns]

a little underexposed, and the lighting is weird, casting that odd shadow behind the kid.

You're not doin too badly though...keep up the good work.

 

[jdphotographer2091]

how would i fix the shadow behind him