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Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by jazzphoto, Jan 25, 2012.

  1. jazzphoto

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    Looking for some feedback..

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    A pleasant shot with nice tonal range. I would have cropped the top a bit. It also would be better if there were a figure or dog maybe somewhere in the pic. Only my opinion.
     
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    It feels incomplete to me. I agree that something in the bottom right corner would help to balance the image. Otherwise I feel like I really need to see the rest of the barn.
     
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    Like everyone else has said so far, I agree that something is missing in the photo, and the top of the photo should be cropped just a little. In my opinion I would said that the contrast on the black and white should be a little more. Other than that great concept.
     
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    Since the main object of this shot is very heavy, it is always better to leave some breathing space; of course i found it good :D
     
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    There is much more detail and contrast in the barn than anywhere else, so I find the sky, trees and ground to be just distractions from the real image. Of course you have to include little of these, but I would crop tighter. This is a subject that demands closer shots of its parts. If you can go back, get closer and get more detail.
     

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