need opinions on what i could do better...

[quickphotography78]

Dance costumes of my daughter...





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[KmH]

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I would recommend working on the lighting. The vignette looks to heavy.

 

[oldmacman]

NUmber 4 is my favourite because of the angle, crop and use of leading lines. All the shots have flat lighting and I guess you are using an on camera flash based on the shadow in the last image. If you can get the flash off the camera, you will be able to sculpt with light more and give some volume to the dress and figure. Maybe try getting her to do a dance pose. I think legs are important for a dance costume and I am not sure about the decision to crop the head number 3. Also looks like missed focus there. I like number 2 as a portrait, but again, work on the lighting.