Need Opinions!

[LTP]

I wish I had a macro lens to do this photo, but I was just practicing.
I need opinons on the following photos. I'm new at this photography thing but it's something I'd really like to do with my life.

Did I focus these right? Is the color okay? How should I edit these? Etc.

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Thank you!

 

[shootermcgavin]

Depth of field is really shallow in 2, try getting your aperture up to like 6-10. 1 doesn't do much for me. 3rd you would want to crop up and totally cut her arm off above elbow, also you cut a little too much of her head off. Thanks for posting!